这段内容主要介绍了北京大运河博物馆的设计与建设情况，包括其地理位置、建筑面积、设计单位、施工单位、设计时间等各方面的信息。整体来说，信息详实但是略显枯燥，欠缺文案的魅力和观赏性。下面是我的批评和建议：
1. 内容的组织结构过于臃肿，需要进行适当的删减和重组，使其更加简洁明了。
2. 需要加入更多的艺术感言和文化内涵，使得内容更加生动有趣。
3. 注意引号使用错误。
最后，我建议重新构思整段内容，让它更富有文学性和吸引力，同时保持信息的准确性和完整性。
正确的英文翻译应为：
"Beijing Grand Canal Museum | China Architecture Design and Research Institute + AREP | 2023 | China
The Beijing Grand Canal Museum (East Wing of the Capital Museum) is located in the northwest of the urban green core of the Beijing sub-center, about 800 meters south of the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal. With a total construction area of 99,700 square meters (including 62,000 square meters above ground and 37,700 square meters below ground), it is a super-large comprehensive museum. It is known as one of the three major cultural buildings in the Beijing sub-center along with the nearby Beijing Art Center and Beijing Urban Library.
The Grand Canal has played an irreplaceable and unique role in the history of Beijing's construction. From the international scheme solicitation in 2018 to the completion and use by the end of 2023, the design team has deeply researched significant topics such as the historical and cultural origins of the Grand Canal and Beijing, the spatial pattern of the Beijing sub-center and the characteristics of Tongzhou region, as well as the development trends of modern public cultural buildings. The aim is to integrate historical elements into modern life, creating a public cultural space where nature and humanities are reflected - “the canal enters the hall, the mast pulls the enormous canopy, and the streets and alleys by the riverbanks bring alive the culture of Beijing”. Ancient and modern elements are merged, hoisting the sail of Chinese civilization by the thousand-year-old Grand Canal.
▽ Overall appearance from the main entrance © Li Ji
Project Name: Beijing Grand Canal Museum (East Wing of the Capital Museum)
Location: Tongzhou District, Beijing
Clients: Capital Museum, Beijing Sub-center Investment and Construction Group Co., Ltd.
Design Units: China Architecture Design and Research Institute Co., Ltd., AREP Design Group (France)
Construction Contractor: Beijing Urban Construction Group Co., Ltd.
Design Time: January 2018 - February 2023
Construction Period: October 2019 - November 2023
Building Area: 99,700 square meters
Chief Designers: Cui Kai, Luc NÉOUZE
Design Directors: Cui Kai, Jing Quan, Li Jingwei
Structural Design Director: Ren Qingying
AREP Design Team: Jiang Xingxing, You Yukun, Sun Daliang, David PERERA, Pierre GRENIER, Li Li, Zhang Chang, Wang Hongyun, Hou Yan, Lin Hai, Shen Chen, Liang Zuohao, Wu Yang, Zhu Ji
China Institute Design Team:
Architecture Specialty: Wu Nanwei, Zheng Xuhang, Wang Zhenning, Li Jing, Shan Lixin, Xu Songyue, Xu Huayu, Shen Lanxing, Zhang Shaofei, Chen Kai, Qu Bike, Li Xiuping, Huo Jiachen, Zhai Pengcheng, Li Dongliang, Lou Shasha, Zheng Ying, Zhang Weicheng
Overall Design Specialty: Zheng Ailong, Qi Haijuan, Lu Jianqi, Bai Hongwei
Structure Specialty: Liu Wenting, Yang Jie, Liu Xiang, Li Zheng, Ren Haibo, Liu Shuai, Ren Qingying, You Tianzhi
Water Supply and Drainage Specialty: Zhu Lin, Du Jiang, Xia Shuwei, Cui Yaqian, Liu Yabiao, Yang Peng, Yang Donghui, Liu Dongyang
HVAC Specialty: Wang Chunhua, Yao Dengke, Liu Yanjun, Xu Zheng, Pan Yungang
Electrical Specialty: Chang Liqiang, Li Zhanzeng, Xiao Yan, Song Haiwei, He Mu, Chen Qi, Li Junmin
Intelligent Specialty: Tang Yi, Wang Ye, Zhu Min, Zhang Yuezhen, Zhang Ya, Chen Qi, Li Junmin
Interior Specialty: Gu Dahai, Han Wenwen, Wang Songtao, Guo Lin, Guo Xiaoming, Zhang Shaoqing, Xi Chunyang, Liu Zhenbo
Landscape Specialty: Guan Wujun, Shen Tao, Teng Yichen, Wang Yue, Liao Mai, Lv Jianqiang, Guan Jieya, Hao Yongfang, Liu Yiting, Li Shaojun, Cao Lei, Liu Zihe, Shao Tao, Li Jia, He Xueyu, Zhang Yubin
Curtain Wall Specialty: Niu Xu, Mou Haitao, Sun Zhou
Lighting Specialty: Huang Siping, Ding Zhiqiang, Li Zhanjie
Economic Specialty: Zhuo Xinlun, Teng Fei, Chen Xin, Zhou Yuting, Bian Xiaoyan, Wang Zhenzhen, Niu Yuting
BIM Design: Guo Weifeng, Ma Yangang, Chi Rui, Ma Qinggang, Zhi Ruojiang, Xing Tianqi
Wayfinding System Design: An Xiaobo
Prefabricated Technology Support: Zhang Lanying, Wei Zhenfei, Lou Ni
Resident Coordination: Lv Yiwei, Zhang Yiming
Curtain Wall Consultant: China Construction Research Technology Co., Ltd.
Lighting Consultant: Beijing Ningzhijing Lighting Design Co., Ltd.
Green Building Consultant: Professor Lin Borong's team from the School of Architecture, Tsinghua University
Energy Conservation Consultant: Beijing Geli Technology Co., Ltd.
Fire Protection Consultant: Jianyan Fire Protection Technology Co., Ltd.
Acoustics Consultant: Acoustic Laboratory, School of Architecture, Tsinghua University
Laboratory Process Consultant: Beijing Daina Experimental Technology Co., Ltd.
Kitchen Process Consultant: Beijing Hongyeshuncheng Kitchen Equipment Co., Ltd.
Signage Design: Beijing Vision Culture Co., Ltd."
参考文案：
1. 参考名人名言： "Every great dream begins with a dreamer. Always remember, you have within you the strength, the patience, and the passion to reach for the stars to change the world." - Harriet Tubman
2. 参考文学作品： 冯唐的《幽默语录》中的语录：“因为我幽默睿智，所以幽默成了我的常态。”
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