回顾整个文案,有一些语病和错误需要修正。首先,在项目摄影的部分,“Noaidwin Sttudio” 应更正为 “No Aidwin Studio”。其次,项目类型中的“Hospitality › European Cuisine, French Bakery and Café”可以更具体地描述为“餐饮服务 › 欧式料理、法式面包房和咖啡厅”。此外,建议将“Shahaan and Sagar”更正为“Shahaan 和 Sagar”。
在修改后,这段文案可以更简洁和清晰地呈现出来,同时减少了语病和错误。如果需要更多改进意见,我可以帮你进行润色和优化。
参考文案:
"Design Project: Trezoro Restaurant
Architecture Firm: Studio M Design
Location: Piplod, Surat, India
Photography: No Aidwin Studio
Lead Architects: Moiz Faizulla, Samad Shaikh
Design Team: Janvi Nanavati, Namrata Dada, Mousumi Doshi, Sajid Shaikh
Building Area: 3000 ft²
Site Area: 1800 ft²
Design Year: 2023
Completion Year: 2023
Interior Design: Studio M Design
Software Used: AutoCAD, SketchUp
Client: Shahaan and Sagar
Project Status: Completed
Project Type: Hospitality › European Cuisine, French Bakery and Café"
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